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Greg Allen
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Quick Kick (QK) survived, he doesn't how or why. The last thing he remembered was fighting a host of B.A.Ts . He had one down  & 2 in front of him,when someone hit him from behind. As he was going down he thought " at least I won't end up one of them".

When QK regained awoke after 1hr, 1 day  1mth who knows? He was strapped to a table in what appeared to be a broken down abandon lavatory.Thinking of a way to get free , he flexed his arms & the strap seemed to break with ease. As he looked down at his arms to see how he broke his straps , QK suddenly let out a horrible scream. His hands & wrists were replaced by metal ! His screams also brought unwanted company as a quartet of THEM broke into the room. As the the four approached QK ,he instantly sprang into action with speed he never had before - he quickly beheaded 2 of them had the 3rd one in his arms literally tearing his brain out of his head as he drew his gun & blew the 4th one brains out.

As both of them dropped to the ground, QK looked at his hands with shock & awe. Behind him a noise, QK turned to see a monitor come to life with a message flashing across the screen : FIND THE JOES - FIND THE JOES - FIND THE ANSWERS - WEST - WEST -WEST & just like that the screen goes blank. QK not knowing what else to do began to look around & pack everything he thinks he needs including spare parts for his arms.He looks around once more before he heads out the door & simply says : WEST!

As QK walks out & closes the door, the monitor clicks on again & flashes one word: YES!

June 1, 2011 at 12:11 AM Flag Quote & Reply

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Love it. Quick Kick was one of my favorites as a kid. Yours is excellent. Awesome work.


"O, woe be the day the enemy descends, mourn we will, for the sake of all that's holy in this universe....

... 'cause the Alley Viper Corps is gonna fuck it ALL up!" - NFC

June 1, 2011 at 8:21 AM Flag Quote & Reply

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Freaky. Hope you keep his story up, I'm eager to find out who did that to him & why.

June 1, 2011 at 9:20 AM Flag Quote & Reply

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simple but really really cool concept, really enjoying the originality


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June 1, 2011 at 3:03 PM Flag Quote & Reply

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